Does my character's dream make sense?

it makes sense and i like it a lot! but the part with my subconscious pictured it. she wouldn't really know it was her subconscious if she was in a dream. later in ur story u could say that part when shes thinking about the dream. also the part about half of her being dead you may want to find a better way to say that but love the idea! also when she falls down the hole in the ground she shouldnt start screaming - she should wake up right before she hits the ground. she shoul wake up and shoot straight up in bed covered in a cold sweat. i would love to read the rest of it once you have it. email me :) salvatorebree@yahoo.com